I'm third year student of NPRU; therefore, it was the last time for attending on the International Day. That day I enjoyed and learned many things.
I practiced dacnce and gave the information of Philippines to others because I would present it in that day. I'm knew about information of famous persons of Philippines and I gave this information to another people. I had scarcely had free time when I stood at Philippines board. Of course, I'm tried but I felt good. My friends and I danced Philippines song although it not good but we smiled and happy. I visited another board when I had free time. I wrote my Chinese name by a paint brush at China board. I took a photo with samurai doll at Japan board. I tasted Thai foods at Thailand board. I felt happy about activities at the board of each country. I learned culture fo many countries such as Laos, Philippines, England, USA, Australia, China, Japan and Thai.
I thought it good way for learn about many culture and working with another people through activities. Thank you for teachers, my friends and everyone who worked together on International day. That day was one of my impression. I never forgot it.
I like it same you,the International day. It made me happiness.
ตอบลบI thing same you about more knowledge,cultur of another county,and this year is last inthenational day for me too.
ตอบลบI think so, the International day,2010 was the last time for us.And that was the best for us to do everything on that day.
ตอบลบHi my friend. I think you are very hardworking. "dacnce=dance"
ตอบลบTo Aung...!
ตอบลบI think same you about the last time for us attend the international day.You write it so easy to understand I like it but I see the word"dance" you spelling wrong naja! but That day I happy same you.
Hi...Ang Ang
ตอบลบI think same you. you write it easy and understand.
Dear Aung,
ตอบลบGlad for see that you were impressed on the International Day. And I felt as the loser when I think that next year we will lack all of you.
Anyway, I hope that all of you might join with us if you are free.
For your writing, there are some mistakes on your task. For example, "I'm third year student of NPRU therefore it was a last time for attened in International Day." should be "I'm third year student of NPRU; therefore, it was the last time for attending on the International Day."
Or "I practiced dacnce and information of Philippines before International day because I will present about it. " should be "I practiced dacnce and gave the information of Philippines to others because I would present it in that day."
However, your writing is easy to understand. Next time, after writing, please check it and edit it. I believe, it could help your work is greater than this.
It is a good article.But there are a little mistake in grammar such as the first sentence in last paragraph"I thought it good way".
ตอบลบDon't be worry honey,your article was easier than Madew's article .
I'm third year student = I'm the third year student.
ตอบลบI practice dacnce = I practice dancing.
I'm knew = I knew
It not good but I smiled and happy = It was not good but I smiled and happy
I thought it good way for learn about many culture and working with another people through activities. = I thought it was good way for learning many cultures and working with another people through activities.