Maggie Peyton was a member of a famous racing family. Her father thought that women and racing car couldn't go together. When Maggie met Herbie the amazing talking Volkswagen number 53, Herbie could send her to the top of the racing world.I thought the theme of movie was a relationship of family and it fun because The character of car was alive. I thought Herbie looked like a naughty children, lovely and I liked it.
Well... thanks for writing by your own ideas in this blog. Thanks a lot again and again. For this blog, I found that there still are lots of mistakes in your blog.
ตอบลบFor example, "Maggie Peyton was a member of racing family famous. Her father thought women and car racing don't go together. " should be "Maggie Peyton was a member of a famous racing family. Her father thought that women and racing car couldn't go together."
Or "When Maggie met Herbie the amazing talking Volkswagen number 53, Herbie could send her to the top of the racing world." should be "When Maggie met Herbie, the amazing talking Volkswagen number 53, Herbie could send her to the top of the racing world."
And, again, please remind yourself that using your own words in writing. If not, I will not give any scores for you...